Thursday, October 31, 2013

#GBE2: Only the Ending

With so many stories, I had a tough time deciding which ending to post for this week's GBE2 prompt to end a story and leave your readers wondering what happened to get to this point. Here is a little gem I call, Beam Me Up From the Girls' Bathroom
 
            Celia whispered to Macy. Macy whispered to Celia, and I was stuck waiting for the answer that could ruin my life.
            “Fine.” Celia stomped toward her desk with Macy tagging along. “You win, creep!” She yelled across the room.
            Just then Logan, the coolest kid in school, said, “That’s right! My grandma took me in the girls’ bathroom.” The excited boys gathered around him.
            “What does it look like?”
            “You’re so lucky!”
            “I wish my grandma would take me there.”
             “My grandma takes me in the girls’ bathroom all the time,” I said.       

7 comments:

  1. I've never thought of the loo as being an enviable destination. :OD

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  2. I think I'd rather go to the library!

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  3. The boys bathroom always fascinated me as a little girl, but no one took me into one. Dang it!

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  4. Hahahahaha - I made my son come in the "girls" bathroom with me up until last year.

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  5. Very funny. Grandma always makes everything special, even a trip to the bathroom.

    Hugs and chocolate!

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  6. My 6-yr old fights going in the girl's bathroom, lol, but if it's just him and me, he's out of luck. :)

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  7. Haha! thanks for the giggle

    Have a tanfastic weekend ;-)

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