Saturday, October 18, 2014

WeWriWa - Slater to the Rescue

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Those who tuned in last week learned about my little guy being blamed for Slater's fart in class. Things weren't as glum as they looked because Slater came to Knob's rescue.

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“I confess!” He [Slater] dramatically flung his hands in the air and then slapped his head on both sides. Ignoring Ms. Benson’s squinting eyes, he said, “It was me and those Country Bean’s sausages my mom cooks. Completely nutritious and delicious, but oh, the consequences of eating them.”

Everyone broke out laughing. Even Ms. Benson cracked a slight smile for a moment before returning to her business-like tone. “Slater, class time.”
“Sorry, Ms. Benson. I promise not to eat any more sausages before school.” 

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16 comments:

  1. Chelle CorderoOctober 18, 2014 at 11:37 PM

    Sounds like he's been listening to one too many television commercials, lol. Lots of humor in this scene, very entertaining.

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  2. Nicolette HugoOctober 19, 2014 at 1:59 AM

    Lovely humour :)

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  3. gemma parkesOctober 19, 2014 at 4:43 AM

    Funny, fast paced snippet!

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  4. BoopnutOctober 19, 2014 at 5:38 AM

    Too cute!
    Deb

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  5. messymimiOctober 19, 2014 at 8:48 AM

    If you can make them laugh, they will forgive you almost anything!

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  6. UnknownOctober 19, 2014 at 10:10 AM

    nice scapegoat! I'll have to remember to use that one! LOL

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  7. Veronica ScottOctober 19, 2014 at 2:54 PM

    A light moment! Nice that the teacher was amused as well...seems very true to life!

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  8. Elaine CantrellOctober 19, 2014 at 3:19 PM

    I had farting 9th graders in class this past week. They're so fascinated with it. You captured the moment perfectly.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014 at 5:36 PM

    Fun snippet.

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  10. Meka JamesOctober 19, 2014 at 7:59 PM

    hahahaha too funny. I don't know how Ms. Benson manages to get any class time done. It sounds like she has a class full of clowns.

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  11. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014 at 8:09 PM

    What a class clown! But let's be honest... everybody farts.

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  12. UnknownOctober 19, 2014 at 10:18 PM

    Oh my gosh, how cute. I love this kid. Do you know just today I had a long conversation with my seven and five year old about farting. They love that stuff. Elijah, my seven year old told Anthony my five year old that everyone farts, even girls and then stopped to think and said, but I've never heard a girl fart. LOL Great snippet!

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  13. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014 at 10:43 PM

    Slater's quite the character. Sounds like he'll be taking over the class soon.

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  14. UnknownOctober 20, 2014 at 4:06 AM

    Haha, very amusing :). When I saw the sentence beginning with 'Ignoring', all I could think was a quote from a class I did a year ago- "The thing after the comma must be thing doing the -ing". :)

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  15. Catch My WordsOctober 20, 2014 at 6:54 AM

    Thanks, Sarah. I've seriously considered abandoning this hop because no one gives me constructive criticism on my work. Also, I feel like people get their feelings hurt if I make a suggestion, too. It's good to have someone find something I need to fix.

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  16. AnonymousOctober 21, 2014 at 8:37 AM

    LOL that was awesome! The speech was so cute--halfway sounding like a commercial. I could picture everyone laughing.

    Keep smiling,
    Yawatta

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