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It's been over a month since I've participated in Six Sentence Sunday, but I'm glad to be back with an excerpt from my Work in Progress (WIP), Mrs. Zimmerman's Donuts. Knob has just met his friend Slater's mom for the first time, and he's not used to adults playing tricks.
Slater’s mom pulled a chisel-shaped knife out of an antique cabinet's top drawer and leaned her head back. With the precision of a surgeon, she gently slid the blade downward until it disappeared into her throat. Next she thrust it out with one gigantic swing. Blood covered the blade while red liquid filled her mouth. Her eyes rounded as her lips curved into a smug smile. She winked at me!
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10 comments:
Great Six! Even though I knew it was a trick, I still winced :-)
Great six!!
Nice six. Yikes! Great trick.
Yikes, I'm glad you told us it was a trick. Great six!
Oh, lordy!! Definitely got my attention!!
Very tense--and I am still not so sure it is a trick. Too well done!
I winced too. Great six. Thank you.
I'm traumatized on his behalf!
~Xakara
Dawn's Early Light 6SS
Shocking six! Very bloody. LOL
I am also glad you told us it was a trick, otherwise I would wonder about it being a book for young people. :) Nicely done.
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