Wednesday, June 19, 2024
Dollar Deals, Writing Blog Post, and Fun Freebie!
Monday, June 17, 2024
Develop Your Craft To Become a Great Writing Instructor
Many teachers complain their kids don't want to write, so I ask, do you enjoy writing? I've found a teacher's love of a subject matter is contagious.
In the 1990s, I purchased a few writing lesson books and gave my students fill-in-the-blank lessons. The author started the story and would stop to have students add details. Students used three sentences to describe a person or place. It looked interesting, so I wrote along with my kids.
Before long, I discovered I loved this activity and would share my work with students. I applied each writing lesson to my craft, and guess what? I was writing novels. I've written five manuscripts for fun and multiple reading passages on TpT. I downloaded one middle-grade novel about bullying on TpT as well.
It occurred to me, how does one who doesn't write him or herself teach writing? How do you critique a kid's work if you don't know how to improve it: This is why I recommend writing teachers spend this summer working on YOUR craft. Writing is a critical thinking activity that ignites your creative juices, plus it's fun!
Here is a quick prompt to get you going:
The kids were not the only ones waiting for summer vacation. This past summer, we drove to the beach. When we arrived, we spotted an unusual animal. (Your turn: Write three sentences describing what you saw).
As our son approached the creature, I said, "Stop!" After all, we didn't know what it was or what it would do to him. Being a curious fellow, his face told us we were in trouble. (Your turn: Describe the boy in three sentences.)
I tried to grab our child, but it was too late. Just like Spider Man's spider bite gave the cartoon hero amazing abilities, our kid became __________________.
If you enjoy writing, you can create something that will make you proud. My students beamed after strong writing, especially when they continually won our city-wide competitions!
I have multiple writing lessons with tips on how to improve writing. Each lesson is a specific skill. However, the trick which helps the most is to eliminate "be verbs."
For example: A kid will write: The dog was big.
First, many adjectives relate to size, so why use this first-grade verb?
More importantly, think about how much power the writer can achieve by removing the "was" and using what follows as the adjective before the noun. Next, find a strong action verb to get the dog to do something that brings talk of its size to another level.
The enormous dog lunged and showed its gunk-filled teeth as slobber dripped down its quivering jaw.
I enjoyed writing that sentence, so I suggest you have fun this summer using writing lessons on your own craft. This will develop a love of writing which can be passed to your kids this fall! Best of luck!
Joyce
Monday, November 6, 2023
💵 $100 TpT Gift Card Giveaway and Dollar Deals! 🥂
Good luck with the giveaway and happy shopping!
Joyce
Tuesday, October 24, 2023
Wordless Wednesday Mopping Supplies at Target
Sunday, October 8, 2023
Musical Monday Moves Me: We Didn't Start the Fire
Sunday, September 24, 2023
Musical Monday at Mister Hats, Aww
Above is a photo of Daniel with his grandfather, Alvin Lansky of blessed memory, the original Mister Hats. When it became difficult for my father-in-law to run the hat store, my son bought it. Business is fabulous and includes an online store where you can purchase the wonderful hats seen in this video.Address:
Mister Hats
113 South Highland St.
Memphis, TN 38111
Store Hours:
Monday - Saturday
10:00am - 6:00pm
Closed Sunday
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Monday, September 18, 2023
Monday Movie Songs
Today's challenge is movie tunes. I've chosen to highlight football movies because I have a great new logic puzzle for high schoolers about . . . you guessed it . . . FOOTBALL!
But if you came here for songs, here is Peace Train from Remember the Titans.
Here is another football movie tune. Let's Come On and Take a Free Ride with a song from Invisible.
Wednesday, September 13, 2023
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Sunday, September 10, 2023
Musical Monday Live at The Garden
My husband and I enjoyed another outdoor concert, Friday night.
The first band was called, Parmalee. I had never heard of this band named for their North Carolina town, but I knew some of their music. Here is "Take My Name."
Matt Thomas, the lead singer of Paralee, told a story about someone giving them a check for $11,000 to record their first four songs. When the check bounced, his mother took out a loan on her three-bedroom house to pay for it. Now, that he's made it big, he's paid off her house note and bought her a car. That was a good investment! Here is their first hit, Carolina, recorded thanks to his mom.
Next up was the band we came for, Train. I love how they start all of their concerts. They have the best intro!
Train played their new song. They said they'd play it over and over again until we liked it. Not needed. I liked it the first time I heard it!
They have a lot of great song hits, like "Drive By."
Train threw t-shirts into the audience, including one Pat Monahan put on for a few minutes while the band signed it. He also took a bunch of selfies with phones from the audience, and we hit multiple beachballs into the air. I was happy to be able to touch one!
Toward the end of the concert, Monahan said, "We used to walk off-stage and wait for everyone to applaud us back, but I'm too old for that sh*t; so, do you want to hear a few more?" Of course, we did!
By the way, he's 54 years old, which seems a lot younger than it used to.
Friday, September 8, 2023
Creepy Dolls and 911
Who doesn't love a scary puzzle about creepy dolls possessing high school students? Check out my newest logic puzzle while it is on sale for only a dollar!
With 9/11 in a few days, look at this!
September 11 Historical Fiction Story
Teach about Patriots' Day with this historical fiction story based on real events from 9/11. Students will follow Jessica through the terror of not knowing her father's whereabouts on September 11, 2001. This no-prep reading passage is available in print or digitally and includes a historical fiction story, vocabulary work, discussion questions, and a complete answer key. Perfect for grades 4 - 7.
Inside this engaging, no-prep historical fiction story, you'll find:
- 4-page Historical Fiction Story
- 1-page Epilogue and Author's Note at End of Story.
- 15 Vocabulary Words
- Enrichment Vocabulary Word Sentence Prompt
- Vocabulary Sentence Matching
- 7 Discussion Questions
- A Research Question
- Complete Answer Key
- Printable pdf. file
- Link to Google Drive
- Easel Access
Please read a sample from this product to see the quality of my writing.
I felt the air escape from my lungs as if I’d just been punched in the gut. My dad’s office was on the 80th floor of the North Tower. He was a heavy man who suffered from Diabetes. In his poor shape, I felt certain he’d have trouble climbing down eighty flights of stairs to leave the building. “Could he have taken the elevator down to the lower floors and gotten out?”
This resource is great for teaching about Patriot's Day. The story is engaging and contains high-level words to build vocabulary. The discussion questions, along with a research question, help students to build writing skills.
Awesome Blossoms
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ "I loved this and we used it for our reading the week of 9/11. It was easy to add questions and ideas that I needed to cover. My kids were captivated by the story."
Erine A.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ "Just what I need for my kids to understand what happened before they were born."
Thanks for reading!
Joyce













